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Planning to study physiotherapy program in UK.
The comment below said that my original persont statement (attached file: personal statement 2023) was not strong enough and not specific:
“I regret to inform you that we have been unable to offer you a place to study with us because your Personal Statement was not strong enough for your application to proceed. A strong statement will demonstrate a detailed insight of your chosen career through experience and understanding.”
Two samples(attached files: PE_sample_B & PE_sample_D) are attached for your references.
The two websites below from UK universities provides guidance in writing outstanding personal statement.
https://www.ucas.com/undergraduate/applying-university/writing-personal-statement/how-write-personal-statement
https://www.southampton.ac.uk/courses/how-to-apply/undergraduate-applications/personal-statement.page
600-650 words would be nice. Many thanks.