Assignent Solutionnurs

hello
you did a paper for me that is already uploaded ” a structured review file”
and I would like you to edit ” result 09.03 file” just edit result section because I have looked at results section which still needs quite a lot of work. You will see I have made a lot of comments. I am sorry to say that my superviser said that this section it would not pass so please take your time to make the necessary changes and send the results back to me.
AND I SHARE ” Gandy 2019 file” that as an example  to help you to get idea for how to write a results sectionÂ